It was the strangest thing.
She’d never cared before about winning.
Life had been about basking in the sun
at the entrance to her burrow.
Sometimes when she was warm enough,
she’d plod off in search of leaves.
Now, she thought about finish lines.
The feel of the ribbon on her prehistoric nose.
The roar of the crowd as she crossed.
They say tortoises don’t have feelings,
no hippocampus in their small brains,
but she’d felt it, the thrill of success.
She spent decades looking for another race
she had a chance to win. None of her friends
could understand. Come dig in the sandy soil,
they said, but it wasn’t enough anymore.
She wished she’d never said yes to that race.
She wished she could race the hare again tonight.
She wished she could stop defining her life
by that one moment. Wished she could stop wishing
for any life beyond the life she had now,
sleeping in her burrow, cool and moist.
Wished all she wanted were soft weeds and long-leaf pines.
Wished she could hear that crowd just one more time.
published in ONE ART: A journal of poetry
So good and so sad.
oh that attachment to old versions of identity–I wonder in just how many ways I am this tortoise
This is exactly how I feel about being a blogger.
I love this comment so much … yeah …
Your poem and a long bike ride spurred me to write a post about your poem. Sort of a blogging daisy-chain.
thanks for the heads up … loved seeing the way you leapt into new musings …
Oh, how elusive is contentment!
ahhhh yes … all these layers of identity, how they cling!
Haberse animado a correr años atrás, animarse ahora a enfretar sus deseos ahora.
Exelente!
So daring!!! Crazy to meet ourselves … Thank you so much for this comment–