choked with ice
the river impedes itself—
I catch myself
thinking
it is beautiful
*
why dream
of unrestricted days
says the part of me
that stands
in my way
*
love, let us
be naked together—
how did we ever
get fooled that we
are not enough?
*
dark current
its edges invisible—
just because
we can’t see the path
doesn’t mean it isn’t there
*
a lifetime,
not long enough
to watch the river move across itself
and still this moment
holds everything
This one is especially relevant – and beautiful. Thank you!
Thank you 🙂
Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer http://www.wordwoman.com tel. 970-728-0399
From: “comment-reply@wordpress.com” Reply-To: Date: Thursday, January 28, 2016 at 5:56 AM To: Rosemerry Trommer Subject: [A Hundred Falling Veils] Comment: “Five Currents”
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The last of the five is a full ringing, nice reflective insight, you reveal layers of awareness….
Thank you, Rick I always love knowing which words you find resonance with. Love r
Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer http://www.wordwoman.com tel. 970-728-0399
From: “comment-reply@wordpress.com” Reply-To: Date: Thursday, January 28, 2016 at 6:25 AM To: Rosemerry Trommer Subject: [A Hundred Falling Veils] Comment: “Five Currents”
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That first one, yes, I saw the river, all frozen up. You have made it move again.
aw, hey, thanks David. It¹s so beautifully frozen here, I love watching it every day as it changes shapes And that color! Xo r
Rosemerry Wahtola Trommer http://www.wordwoman.com tel. 970-728-0399
From: “comment-reply@wordpress.com” Reply-To: Date: Thursday, January 28, 2016 at 6:52 PM To: Rosemerry Trommer Subject: [A Hundred Falling Veils] Comment: “Five Currents”
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