so oh slippery flesh song
of skinny oh dipping
into oh icy clear
of blue oh in the high
alpine lake, oh and oh
how the shiver oh
breath oh is oh
such wild thrill in the oh
can you oh even dream
of how good it is oh
to be oh just a few
more oh seconds
held by oh liquid snow
so oh yes so only
right oh here
and so oh yes so very
oh nakedly
yes oh alive
I love how effectively you portrayed the coolness of the water in this poem! I found myself shivering and gasping and brilliantly alive along with you.
as my friend Emily just write me, the oh-zone!!! i realized there is no way to not get in that cold water without making gasping sounds–oh! thanks for jumping in, too!