a heap of twigs
leaves
& grass
should compost
two years later
I still have
a heap of twigs
leaves
& grass
October 22, 2011 by Rosemerry
a heap of twigs
leaves
& grass
should compost
two years later
I still have
a heap of twigs
leaves
& grass
Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged 84, compost, failure, synergy | 1 Comment
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The idea of compost not composting is synergistic, for sure, but that line “should compost” is, I think, in the wrong place. It mucks up the “two years later” line, as if one “should compost two years later” but I know the space between means to indicate a passing of time. If you start the poem, “should compost” I think you’ll at least see what I mean, by pushing the intention to the top.