I can see the two of you out there under the stars, but I have to say those three adjectives in front of the last “point” are a struggle for me to read. I mean, I think there’s too much there, trying to counter-echo that second line. It reads much smoother for me if I attached an ly to the word infinite.
I can see the two of you out there under the stars, but I have to say those three adjectives in front of the last “point” are a struggle for me to read. I mean, I think there’s too much there, trying to counter-echo that second line. It reads much smoother for me if I attached an ly to the word infinite.
Ohhhh – the unexpected sweet moments that happen within the mundane. Lovely.