this living skin
a billboard
for god’s graffiti
*
milky way
in my hand
a spiral
*
stars beyond stars
all of us swathed
in stars
July 16, 2012 by Rosemerry
this living skin
a billboard
for god’s graffiti
*
milky way
in my hand
a spiral
*
stars beyond stars
all of us swathed
in stars
Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged haiku, poem, spiral, the body, unity | 2 Comments
not to nitpick, not me not ever, the first haiku seems a bit outta place with the two starry ones. perhaps, “this living _sky_/…”?
I do like the notion of the milky way being in my hand and being swathed in stars.
“Starry starry night/paint your palette blue and gray/…”
Quite nice. I wonder if you switched places with number one and two, start with the spiral, then to the skin, then close so beautifully as you always do with those stars.