staring at stars
with these eyes made of
old stars
*
what is your address?
I ask my girl, hoping she’ll say
earth
October 5, 2012 by Rosemerry
staring at stars
with these eyes made of
old stars
*
what is your address?
I ask my girl, hoping she’ll say
earth
Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged haiku, night, poems, stars, unity | 2 Comments
Very clever, those two at night, two haiku, two people. I love the lesson implied here, of teaching a child survival skills but wishing for something larger. Good one (or I should say, two).
“Dominguez Canyon, Telluride, Colorado, United States of North America, Earth, Milky Way, Universe,” Vivian replies.
So, after commenting on preferring the latter poem, when you bundle them, this time, I’m liking the first one, more. “First thought, best thought”?