with thanks to Rebecca Mullen
Here, she said, her pockets
stuffed with forgiveness,
borrow some of mine.
I take it between my fingers
like a coin and hold it up
to see how it shines,
but I hide it quick,
almost embarrassed
to be seen with it.
All day, I touch my pocket
to be sure it’s still there.
All day, I dream of ways
to spend it.
You take such a nice turn there toward the end, where your reluctance is charged with joy at the thought of what might be gained from sharing it, And I do like that simile, forgiveness being like a coin. Wouldn’t all the worry about greed in the world be turned on its head so perfectly.
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