perhaps it is true
we are nothing—
then let me be nothing
that knows how to blush, how to sing
how to weep and laugh at its nothingness
December 27, 2015 by Rosemerry
perhaps it is true
we are nothing—
then let me be nothing
that knows how to blush, how to sing
how to weep and laugh at its nothingness
Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged poem | 2 Comments
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I like almost all of this, except for the second-to-the-last word “its”
The word makes me want to seek a referent, and though I try to associate the word with “we” and “me” I find myself wanting to remove it, read the end as
“…how to weep and laugh at nothingness.” As usual, the title is nice!
Yes, yes, I see what you mean deleting! Xoxo r
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