blue heron
in the tree top—
this quickening heart
*
I draw for myself
a new starting line—
on your open palm
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February 27, 2016 by Rosemerry
blue heron
in the tree top—
this quickening heart
*
I draw for myself
a new starting line—
on your open palm
This is absolutely brilliant..:-)
I like the juxtaposition of “Go Vey Slow” and “the quickening heart.” Then a heart quickened is quite to reason to sloooooow doooooooownm.
I think the starting line should be drawn on the open heart; but then you have a pair of poems, each ending with “heart,” which lessens the punch of both poems.