This is the path of failure. We see that our definition of success is what is not working. What is working is deep, unseen. —Joi Sharp
Even a small discontent is enough to shut us down,
convince us that the world is cold and indifferent.
Everywhere there’s evidence of this: The slush
that falls on your car seat when you open the car door.
The carrion eaters with their great black wings
that linger beside the road. You pray for sun,
and it gets darker. Someone asks
you a question, and you see your whole life
fold into one small envelope of failure.
Then one day you hit against the same
impassable wall you always hit and this time you fall
to your knees, not because you are weak,
but because at last you are ready to be opened.
Oh sweet failure, how it leads us.
Any unhappy ending is only an invitation
to crawl into the blank pages
of the next unwritten chapter.
It was never success that transformed us—
always the breaking. Not the breaking itself,
but the mystery inside pushing through us
like bindweed through pavement
making cracks in everything
we think we know so that the world
can come streaming in.
So true, so well spoken, these momentary lapses in confidence and and stamina. This reminds me of a book title by Bill Holm, The Music of Failure.
Great title, but also, this is a great poem.
Thanks David,
Here I was resisting failure, how could I have forgotten how generous it is. Xo r
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a metaphor for changing the metaphor… the fecundity of failure! That last image was breathtaking… I had a visceral response that was thrilling. Thanks, Rosemerry!
Thank you, Tom … hello failure! Hello teacher! Thanks for this great response!