Raven me, river me, tremor, deliver me,
pink me, tall drink me, unfurl,
canyon me, plunder me, lightning and thunder me,
tide me, tsunami me, curl,
rob my dark berry, my wheat field, my mango,
wring from my cloud all its rain,
unsmall me, outsprawl me, earthquake and enthrall me,
undo me, unwho me again.
Delightful!
This is brilliant and erotic and sexy as hell.
Thanks, Nori … it was very fun to write. Came out of a writing prompt in which we were given seven words we had to use, among them canyon, river, raven, hover …
From: “comment-reply@wordpress.com” Reply-To: Date: Sunday, November 12, 2017 at 10:23 PM To: Rosemerry Trommer Subject: [A Hundred Falling Veils] Comment: “La Petite Mort”
When I first read this fabulous work I wondered if you and your honey were profoundly moved by your reuniting. Or if pouring yourself into the melting pot of poets in the Hocking Hills produced this marvelous reaction! Upon doing a little research I found a quote by literary critic Roland Barthes who spoke of “the feeling one should get when experiencing any great literature.” Your reply above to Nori suggests it was the later.
Hope to see you preform again next fall!
Hi Ann, thanks for the fun response and the quote … I suppose it takes its inspiration from many places! Hope to be back next fall!
I wrote a poem in response to your “La Petite Mort” I’ll Have What Rosemerry’s Having, Thank You Were you and your honey profoundly moved by your reuniting? or did pouring yourself into the melting pot of poets in the Hocking Hills birth this orgasmic transcending creation? your daily log sweeps us along your walk from delightfully dancing in the daffodils to scratching through your canyon of despair your words woman take us there… Bon Appetit My Cherie My Rosemerry
Ann, you made my day ⦠thank you for the response poem! And your title tickles me âº
Whatever Iâm having, Iâll share!
Hugs to you,
r
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From: “comment-reply@wordpress.com” Reply-To: Date: Sunday, November 19, 2017 at 9:42 AM To: Rosemerry Trommer Subject: [A Hundred Falling Veils] Comment: “La Petite Mort”
Amazing!
I can’t stop reading your blog and I won’t <3