—for Rachel
between the cactus,
we walk, our conversation
daring to step wherever it wants
February 24, 2018 by Rosemerry
—for Rachel
between the cactus,
we walk, our conversation
daring to step wherever it wants
Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged conversation, hiking, poem, poetry, Rachel Kellum | 1 Comment
what if you swapped those first two phrases?
“we walk/between the cactus, our conversation/daring to step wherever it wants”
that said, i am seeing that what i’ve suggest, above, changes more than word/phrase order. “between the cactus, we walk,” is different from, “between the cactus we walked,” which is the version i’ve used.