trying to see me
the way that cloud sees me—
disappearing as it does
September 16, 2018 by Rosemerry
trying to see me
the way that cloud sees me—
disappearing as it does
Posted in Uncategorized | Tagged cloud, poem, poetry, self-perception | 2 Comments
“disappearing as it does”
Is it the cloud, or the poem’s narrator, disappearing? Or, is it that “the clouds sees me,” disappearing, just like (“as”) it does?
Yup, love the turn of the closing line.
yes!